Sunday, November 29, 2009

First Draft Poem

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First the feelings swoop,
free in places.

Then separation pens them
to one time, location,
person that you have slowly
shed until,

Eventually, the feelings bind
into memories.

1 comment:

REKording said...

Nice. Leave it alone.

There are no 1st drafts when you publish, there are only opuses.