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Sunday, November 29, 2009

First Draft Poem

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First the feelings swoop,
free in places.

Then separation pens them
to one time, location,
person that you have slowly
shed until,

Eventually, the feelings bind
into memories.
Posted by spk at 5:00 PM

1 comment:

REKording said...

Nice. Leave it alone.

There are no 1st drafts when you publish, there are only opuses.

December 1, 2009 at 1:58 PM

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